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It’s just a ‘Wet Bank Holiday Monday’ sung to the tune of ‘Pleasant Valley Sunday!’ or making a novel memorable

The Monkees song ‘Pleasant Valley Sunday’ was rolling around my head but more the tune to words ‘It’s just a wet bank holiday Monday!’ At this point I would like to pay a tribute to Davey Jones who died at the relatively young age of 66 years in March this year.

I admit it. I was a member of the Monkees Club when I was very little. That dates me doesn’t it and it prompted me to browse on the internet for the rest of the real lyrics and I was taken aback by the timeless nature of verse two:

‘See Mrs. Gray, she’s proud today
Because her roses are in bloom,
And Mr. Green, he’s so serene,
He’s got a TV in every room.

Another pleasant valley Sunday,
Here in Status Symbol Land,
Mothers complain about how hard life is,
And the kids just don’t understand.
Creature comfort goals, they only numb my soul,
And make it hard for me to see.
Ahhh…thoughts all seem to stray to places far away,
I need a change of scenery.’

If you’d like to read the whole song click on this link:

Lyrics

Wow, what a pertinent message from what I considered to be a frivolous pop band. Isn’t that what a lot of people are striving for today; moving away from ‘Status Symbol Land’ towards something more worthwhile?

The wonderful thing, and sometimes irritating, about a catchy tune is the fact that we cannot get it out of our heads and even more amazing, years later, sometimes we still remember all the words too. Mind you it could be a person, time or place which triggers the memory.

How many novels stand the test of time in the same way? Of course there are the classic we are all introduced to at school but how many others. I could count on two hands those novels which have made such an impact on me that I could call them unforgettable and those are the ones I like to keep and they are not necessarily well known, they just met a particular need at the time. Like songs too, their messages often stand the test of time.

How can we as authors strive to achieve this impossible feat?

  1. Writing the best written novel we can. Goes without saying.
  2. Writing a series perhaps.
  3. Linking a story to a particular setting so that the place stirs memories of the novel and characters for the reader.- ~ a good holiday read maybe
  4. A unique plot line.

What do you think? How are you striving to achieve the impossible?

What can I remember about ‘Pleasant Valley Sunday’?

1. The Monkees sang it.

2. ‘Charcoals burning everywhere’ and

3. ‘no one seems to care’

Not bad I suppose for a song frm the ’60’s’!

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A novel impression – unsung heroes v familiar friends and foes

Have you ever thought of the people who never experience the accolade they deserve for their contribution. Last week we focussed on Steve Jobs, remembering his greatness rather than the technology he created.

When you listen to a wonderful  rendition of Mozart, Bach or Beethoven do you ever think of the individual violinist or percussionist?

When you watch a  drama or documentary on the TV do you ever sing the praises of the director or each bit part actor?

When you visit Wiseley or any other famous garden do you ever think of the person who does the weeding?

An author, on the other hand leads you from general truths and events to minute details of individual lives. A successful writer will know how to draw on the reader’s empathy and involvement until the dividing line between the reader’s reality and that of the fictional characters begins to blur at the edges.  The reader needs to understand intimately all of the key players as the drama unfolds.

When a wonderful piece of music comes to an end you are often left with an impression; an echoing but lasting memory of  the experience, but when you come to the end of an excellent novel,  do you ever feel you’ve just said goodbye to a dear friend or a close family member? Do you sometimes feel at a loss for a day or two; almost bereft?

How do we achieve this as an author? How do we leave our readers looking forward to more?

  • Innate ability?
  • Ever learning more about the craft of writing?
  • Forethought and careful planning?

Probably all three!

Tools a writer uses:

  • Sticking to a successful format that readers become familiar with (Agatha Christie)
  • Using a main character or characters within different story lines
  • Writing a series – sequel, prequel..
  • Using the same setting – location for a several stories
  • Setting several novels in the same time period

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There’s a time for every season – Which period to choose?

I’ve never written in the here and now. Always inspired by social history and the classics it was not a surprise that I chose the Victorian Age for Riduna. Writing its sequel in the Edwardian era and through the First World War has been an even more rewarding journey since I have reseached a period in history which I did not cover at school and have always wished to do so.

So how do you choose the time zone for your novel?

Did it just creep up on you?

Did you just happen to stumble on an ancient monument or something which intrigued you….  a newspaper article, tv programme, scene, …… and it set you thinking and on a new path of research?

Are you more comfortable writing in the present?

Have you always loved Sci Fi?

Is it costume dramas/ historical events or people from the past who make you tick?

Are you an expert in a certain period in history?

Most of you will say that’s obvious. We choose a time frame we are familiar with and we enjoy unleashing our imagination in that period, but does it have implications to the way we write?

  • Time taken to complete a novel

If you choose ‘Chic Lit’ or Sci Fi, it is likely that most of the story will flow from your over active brain. You could write a novel in a few months and have it sent to the publishers within six. It could be the next best seller and could certainly earn you a living if it’s good enough. Am I right?

Whereas, if you write in a period in history which is less familiar to you then the time taken to research may be a year or more before you even start to put pen to paper to weave your fiction. Setting, background, language, events, facts; they all have to be checked.

  • Is it a period in history which few have chosen?

Recently several authors have set their work in the time of the Romans. This is particulary pertinent here in England and in much of Europe, where Roman remains abound and it’s not hard to imagine the invaders making their mark say when walking through Verulamium in St Albans or in Northumberland at Hadrian’s Wall. Unless of course you are Italians in which you are also especially proud of your country’s past influence in the world.

Are there any periods in history not covered by authors of the present and past?

  • Is it a period in history well covered?

The World Wars have already inspired copious successful novels and biographies and yet there is always an interest in them and there is certainly always a new angle, or a less familiar story to tell? Maybe this is because the majority of us have a father, grandfather, grandmother or great grandfather who played their part in some way and we are fascinataed by family history. It is still of course in living memory for many and we are approaching the centenary or World War 1. What better time than now to remember?

  • The same but different

This phrase is well used in expressing what a publisher is looking for. Why? Because that’s where the market is. Readers don’t always want to read unusual, obscure books, however well written. They read a novel they enjoy and immediately look for something similar and if there’s nothing more written by that particular author then they will search for other similar authors. It’s a bit like chocolate. Once a Cadburies chocolate lover then other chocolate is fine, but there’s nothing like the treat of even a small bar of Dairy Milk!

  • Is it sustainable?

A publisher, so we’re told, is looking for a book which has potential to grow into a series, whether it’s a sequel or totally different stories, it doesn’t matter. For this reason the choice of time, characters and location all needs carefully thinking through and planning before we start.

Can we afford the luxury of just writing for our own enjoyment and ignoring these issues, or do we need to begin to be less precious and more street wise when gaining inspiration for our novels?

The title of this this blog has a double meaning too, because it also reminds me of one of my favourite songs from the Zombies.

Our novels needs to be memorable too.   

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