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How to Create an Imaginary Setting for a Novel

Draw a map

Draw out a basic map with streets, footpaths, houses, shops and any other key places. Make it large enough to add to. Link it to other towns, real or imaginary, with arrows at the edge of the page. (eg Bedford 5 miles) Add in railway stations and bus stations, if they feature in your novel.

Add Key Illustrative Details

The village or town in your mind’s eye has streets, crossroads and roundabouts, yes, but what makes it come to life is the detail; the gardens and parks with trees, cafes with tables outside, footpaths along rivers, derelict land maybe, the style of buildings, churches, shops and homes. If your map is big enough, you can sketch these on to your original map.

Add descriptive detail

There is a limit to the amount a small sketch can convey. Possibly using post-its, which will grow in numbers even as your novel develops, write key words, adjectives and features, to help each place come to life. (a cafe might have ~ round bright pink bistro tables with fold up chairs outside, a cosy private corner inside with scatter cushions ~cerise pink and yellow, or arm chairs)

Add photos to give a sense of location and the surrounding area

The photos you add may not be exact but, as authors, we often see buildings, people or scenes which remind us of our novel. Even with imaginary settings, the place you have in your mind’s eye is a composite of many pictures of real places.

Photo by Egor Kunovsky on Pexels.com

Cross reference notes

Use a notebook for extra details which you are unable to add to the map, or on postits. (19th century Victorian red brick church, alcoves with carved saints observing you as you pass by, dark wood panelling inside, triptych of gold and vibrant colours …)

Why?

Why go to such detail and trouble? With an imaginary place it is much harder to be consistent. If you are in the middle of writing and a query pops into your head, as to whether you remember the details correctly, it takes a long while to find the previous reference or description in your manuscript.

With the visual and written prompts, you can ensure consistency, and enable reader to imagine the setting almost as clearly as you can.

Include the map

Some authors even include a map at the front of their novel. This is not necessary, but some readers appreciate them, especially if a ‘sense of place’ is key to the novel.

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Why is Writing is Akin to Gardening?

Writing and gardening are my two main activities and I would argue that they they need a similar mindset.

Being Creative

Of course! When I am writing it is very much a visual experience, where pictures or a film reel transposes into words. A creative mind is one with imagination, having an idea of what the finished article is going to be like, whether it be picturing a flower bed or imagining a novel.

A cacophony of spring colour

Cutting out the dead wood

It has taken me years to be more ruthless in my garden (there does appear to be a rogue cerise foxglove in the bed above) but it has to be done, trimming, cutting back, pruning and even rooting out plants that have become too big or are in the wrong place. Similarly, the various layers of editing a novel are just like that.

The heather in February looks a picture but it will need a good trip when the flowers are over

Aiming for a harmony and consistency with the characters

Plants from a spectrum of colours look beautiful together, but so do those chosen carefully for height and contrast. Each plant then needs to be part of the whole picture. It may have beauty in itself, but if it is not consistent with the plot it will look out of place.

The Structure in the design completes the picture

In a garden, the walls, fencing, gravel, decking, grass, all play their part in creating a complete picture. It is the description of setting, which draws the picture for the reader, but it mustn’t be too overpowering taking away the wholeness, so that the reader is distracted or bored.

Sometimes the Result can take your breath away

My last novel, released days before lock down, has not reached the dizzy heights (for me that is) of Murder Now and Then, but Missing Past and Present is very special to me, and as one loyal reader said, ‘You really have discovered your true voice!’

What a lovely place to sit and read!

Finally you’ll just have to let it go

If you are forever tweaking a garden and noticing every weed as it pops its head up, you will never stand back (or better still sit and relax) and enjoy the whole garden. It is a tough moment for an author to ‘let go’ of a completed novel. There will always be a word to change or a scene you are sad you left out because it didn’t quite fit. You need to know the moment to Let it go and enjoy the ride!

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My Review of 2024 in my Writing Life

On the Positive Side

  • I am writing again. Hoorah! It took a long time coming. I have completed the first draft of my sequel to MISSING Past and Present, and will begin to proof read it thoroughly before it goes to the editor. Hopefully to be released mid 2025.
  • Janus, Gateway to Heaven on Earth by my parents, Patricia and Arthur Jackson, is scheduled to be released on 23rd January 2025. It has been a special project for me, having lost both parents during covid, because it is being rereleased as a tribute to them (originally printed by The Daily Mail), with edits from myself, and will be sold in aid of The Alderney Museum. It is actually a prequel to my debut novel Riduna which was first published in 2009. So long ago.
  • Through Eventispress I have been supporting other writers, who have become my dear friends, too numerous to name here. Eventispress has a new Facebook Page. Do search for ‘Eventispress’ and like the page please. (I’m the only person to have done so and I need some friends! They have a good few followers now though) There are some excellent authors to support here and it is getting harder than ever to get this message across.

On the Negative Side

  • The first two projects have taken longer than we thought, but I hope the wait will be worth it and it is sooooo good to be writing again.
  • I have done very little personal promotional work and, like many, am finding Twitter hard to handle now. It’s just not enjoyable anymore. Should I jump ship and go to Bluesky? Many authors have. More about that in the new year.

Nothing else, which is fantastic!

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