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Mid Bedfordshire Murder Mystery Tour ~ No 2 ~ A Walk to look over the vale of Bedford

For the next few posts I will be exploring the places in Bedfordshire I know so well, which feature in my murder mystery ‘Murder, now and then. This time we will leave the bicycle at home and venture on foot.

There are many pleasant walks around Haynes and Clophill ~ one passing the old church and through Pedley Woods returning via great Lane ~ another progressing further through the woods until you emerge overlooking the valley towards Hitchin and the Barton Hills, but today I’m going to take you from Haynes Church, the inspiration for my novel.

There is parking (at your own risk) in the church car park, unless there is a service on, and I’d like you to follow the steps of the video and pause a while at Nelly Rault’s grave. Nelly was the young Jersey lass whose true story and unsolved murder set my writing journey in a direction I had not anticipated, but have thoroughly enjoyed. Once you have found her grave you can also admire the view across to Haynes Park, close to the setting of my murder back in 1919.

We shall walk today because you will be  following in my heroines footsteps, who I have renamed Lucille Vardon.

Back-tracking along the church path, turn left, passing the unspoilt cottages of Haynes Church End on you right. You will pass one of the imposing gateways to Haynes Park, but this is private land. Fortunately for us the farm track immediately to its right is a

Haynes Park, Bedfordshire

Haynes Park, Bedfordshire

designated footpath and this leads parallel to the drive and winds on the edge of farm fields. Taking a right hand turn, clearly marked, the footpath veers towards the village of Haynes before joining another path from the village. Turning left the other side of the hedge you continue, back towards Haynes Park and their farm buildings until you reach a small pond. You can pause on the bench here if you wish to seek some peace and quiet.

The path continues until you are standing above the valley looking over towards Bedford. The sight of the Shortstown hangers, great cathedrals paying homage to the airships of

Shortstown Hangers

Shortstown Hangers

yesteryear including the R101 in the distance ~a sight which captures you breath in a moment’s reflection. Did ‘Lucille’ stop too and gaze in awe of this remarkable sight whilst walking this way from her work at the army camp to Bedford?

Below there are footpaths towards Wilshamstead and, although there is no legal path through the woods now where the 1919 murder took place, but the trees are clearly visible and whilst I was planning my novel my imagination ran riot here, as ideas flowed to intertwine past and present. It was here that I came up with the title ‘Murder, now and then,’ before the ins and outs of the novel were conceived but not long afterwards the idea of a centenary in 2019 began to take shape and the ‘now’ murder shifted a few years!

You may retread your footsteps to return to the church or, if you have a longer walk in mind you could continue back towards the village of Hayes and return to Church End by road, adding another couple of miles or more to your walk.

Returning along the lane you may glance over towards the farmhouse in my novel and your eyes may do a double – take. It does not actually exist and it superimposed on the video ~ clever hey! (I did not wish to upset a local farmer!!)

‘Murder, now and then’ is Diana Jackson’s third novel and is a murder mystery in Bedfordshire set in 2019, with flashbacks to the original murder in 1919. 

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Welcome to Author of Ghost Stories with a Difference ~ CR Hodges

Chuck Iceland‘And now for something completely different!’ With titles like ‘Three Quarters Martian’ you must expect original thinking when you read CR Hodges work. He is joining me now all the way from Colorado and we ‘met’ taking part in a blog hop a while back. (The wonders of modern technology)

Hi CR,

 Thank you for appearing as a guest on my blog. I’m having a mix of visitors this week, authors of quite different genres. I know that you write about ghouls and ghosts and other supernatural beings. What inspired you to do this?

 I’ve never written about ghouls, but you did just give me a new story idea there, thanks for that. As to ghosts and such, I was always more interested in what the ghost thought about being undead, or the valkyrie thought about being wingless, than what the poor helpless human thought of encountering one of the above. So I write a lot of my ghost stories from the spook’s point of view, not the spook-ee. What does it feel like to be alive one instant and dead the next, but still conscious, still observing?

Weird I should think.

Can you describe your current novel in less than thirty words? A tall order, I know.

I stink at compacting 90,000 words down to 30, but for you Diana, I’ll give it a go. This is for my WIP urban fantasy novel, Ragnarök Willie:

A noted archeologist, thirteen valkyries, a blue-bearded giantess, and Lasse Nordberg, college dropout, are all searching the ruins of Valhalla for an ancient weapon of mass destruction. Lasse finds it.

Do you prefer to write short stories or full novels and which is your favourite short story? ….Can you add a link for people to find it too please?

Mostly I’m a short story-ist, with 14 publication credits and another under contract. Not to mention 20 more in various stages of writing, rewriting (I do that a lot), and submission. Writing shorts allows me to try a lot of different voices, plots, points of view and even genres (see below), and it’s arguably easier to get from beginning to end to publication than longer works. That said, I’ve written a couple of novels, one of which, Ragnarök Willie (see above) is almost done and one of which, Gho, I compacted into a novella and sold (see below)

As to favorite short stories, my editors’ and readers’ favorite is clearly “Three-Quarters Martian,” a science fiction short that won a writing contest, got produced in audio format, and martianeven made honorable mention as one of the best online short stories of 2011 in the Million Writers Award. But my personal favorite is a mythica short, “Queen Méabh,” about an archeologist who inadvertently releases the ghost of a 5500-year-old faerie queen in modern-day Ireland.

 

Congrats on your success! I’ve been having discussions on different ways to plan a novel on my blog. Do you have a method which works for you that you’d be happy to share with us? It sounds like you write straight from your vivid imagination.

I’m an engineer in daylight hours so you’d think I’d be a meticulous planner, but I’m not. I’m a pants-er for the most part, meaning I just write by the seat of my pants. I generally try to get a complete draft on to paper in a very rough form and then go back and work the plotline. That said, I’m a spreadsheet junkie, which I use for timelines, character briefs, and backstory tracking. I should really plan more, as a tend toward really complex plots, but all too often my characters take it upon themselves to deviate from plan, so I just have to write down what they do.

 And who is your target audience? Is it mainly YA?

I started out writing YA but I think I’ve migrated more to New Adult, with a fair amount of adult genre as well. My first novel, Gho, a YA ghost story from the ghost’s point of view, will be published in novella form next month in the Bardic Tales and Sage Advice, Volume 6 anthology by Brads and Sages Publishing. I also have a few YA short stories published, including “Preschool War Games” in Cricket and “The Steamer Trunk” in Metro Fiction. But Ragnarök Willie is New Adult fantasy, and the majority of my shorts are either New Adult or adult fantasy or science fiction.

For the authors reading, can you give any tips as to the most successful tool you have used for marketing your work?

 Oh, I stink at that too. Honestly, I think plain old networking works best. Talk to people, make real connections, don’t just count Likes. I try to learn a lot from other writers, both aspiring and successful.

Finally, what about the future? Have you any thoughts as to what projects you will be working on in the next couple of years?

 The future is, maybe, novellas. I’ve always liked the shorter forms, but there has historically been a big gap publishing-wise between short stories and full length novels. There are many many markets for short stories, and of course both TP and SP outlets for novels. But novellas have been in no-man’s land. But I think, just maybe, that this may be changing. The success of Kindle Singles, which range from 5000 to 30,000 words, along with general shortening of attention spans of all of us in the digital age, give me hope that there may be a resurgence for novellas. Besides Gho, I have several more novellas in the early stages, including another valkyrie tale (working title “Riding Hel’s Horse”), an expanded version of “Queen Méabh” and a faerie apocalypse (working title “Beyond the Pale”).

 Interesting. Quite by chance I think my next work launched to the public will be a novella too. I hadn’t thought it through like that though. Where can readers catch up with what you are doing?

CR Hodges’s online haunts can be found at:

crhodges.wordpress.com

www.facebook.com/C.R.Hodges.Author

www.pinterest.com/crhodgesauthor/

For his fellow short story writers, he also maintains a list of over 100 paying speculative fiction markets at crhodges.wordpress.com/short-stories/science-fiction-and-fantasy-short-story-markets/

 

Many many thanks for joining us CR and good luck with your next projects.

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Welcome to Historical Fiction Author ~ Tony Riches

2014Hello Tony. Thank you for appearing as a guest on my blog today. Can
you tell us a little about your latest book Warwick in no more than
twenty words?

Hi Diana – and thanks for inviting me. Subtitled The Man behind the Wars of the Roses, Warwick is about Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick, known as the ‘Kingmaker.’

Can you remember the inspired moment which led you to write Warwick or was it partWarwick of a journey of discovery?

I was watching the BBC series The White Queen, (based on Philippa Gregory’s books) and wondered why the richest man in England would risk everything to back the young Edward IV – then change sides to support Queen Margaret of Anjou, his sworn enemy. I guessed there was more to his story than the BBC suggested – and found no one had ever tackled Warwick’s life as a novel.
Historical fiction is a tricky market and a controversial one. I should know. There will always be historians out there who know far more than we do, though we try our best to ensure authenticity in our writing. Was it your intention to write a good read or to stick as close to historical ‘facts’ as possible?

I enjoyed the research for Warwick and was amazed at what I found out about his life. It can be difficult but I feel historical fiction authors should try their best to ensure that details are checked. It’s fine to ‘fill in the gaps’ but not to ignore well-documented facts. The truth, of course, is often stranger than fiction, so this needn’t be at the expense of a good read.

I agree with you there. It has been said to me that historical fiction is a way of reaching a wider public with key moments in history and may stir an interest in the reader delving into the subject in greater depth. What do you think?

Yes, feedback from readers supports this – it would be great if more people were inspired to look into the pre-Tudor history of England.

That’s true Tony – there are many novels inspired by the Roman period in English history and the 18th and 19th century, but little in between.  On reading Warwick I have been prompted to look into this particular history of St Albans, of which I was totally unaware, even though I grew up there.

You have also written a business management book and one for authors on building a social media platform. Would you say that you are most comfortable writing fiction or non fiction? (or both of course!)

I enjoy being a multi-genre author. My management book was my first US best-seller, based on my work in project management and my previous  novel, The Shell, is set in present day Mombasa.  I’m currently working on another fifteenth century historical fiction book (about Eleanor Cobham) and am planning a trilogy to follow on from Warwick.

Those sound exciting projects for us to look forward to.

Finally, since you are experienced in book marketing, what is the one most important piece of advice you would give an author when launching a novel in order to reach a wider public?

Plan ahead. Set aside time in advance to work with book bloggers and reviewers. I support book launches on my writing blog and am sometimes surprised that authors don’t even have the basic information ready, so you can make life much easier for yourself by having all the links, images, blurb and your bio to hand before the big day.

Is there anything else you would like to add ~ an anecdote maybe?

In an audacious bit of ‘forward planning’ I set up a Twitter account for @EleanorCobham  on the same day I drafted the first chapter of my WiP. Since then she has gained 1,800 followers – and from the comments I wonder how many think she is a real person…

Wow – that’s something to think about. I wonder if it would work with an imaginary character too?

Well Tony, many thanks again for taking the time to appear on my blog and I wish you well. Do let us know when your next project comes to fruition.

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Tony Riches is a full time writer and lives with his wife in Pembrokeshire, one of the most unspoilt areas of the UK. His first novel, Queen Sacrifice was written after looking into the early history of Wales and seeing the parallels to a game of chess, with kings and queens, bishops and castles – and the people becoming pawns in their civil wars. When not writing Tony enjoys sea and river kayaking. He also enjoys hiking and plans to complete the full 186 miles of the Pembrokeshire Coast path which passes fifty-eight beautiful beaches and fourteen harbours. You can find him on Twitter @tonyriches and his new Facebook Author Page

Links: 

Books: http://tonyrichesauthor.wordpress.com/

Blog, The Writing Desk http://tonyriches.blogspot.co.uk/

Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/5604088.Tony_Riches

Warwick Video Trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6y5FcLgpRg

 

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