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Choosing a Book Title

Background

Choosing a book title is a personal thing. Some authors know the title before they begin to write, in fact it appears miraculously as they are doing their research.

Others wait until they have written the first draft. On reading and editing it a title appears as being an obvious choice.

Then there are some novels which arrive at the publishers and one of the team, it could be the editor doesn’t like the chosen title and persuades the author to choose a different one.

Choosing Janus ~ Gateway to Heaven on Earth

My parent’s original title of their novella was simply ‘Heaven on Earth’ so why did I think fit to amend it? Firstly it is a prequel to my Riduna Series, set from the late Victorian era through to WW1 and on to 1920. For both books in the series I chose names which reflected the setting but added an air of mystique.

Riduna, my first novel, is allegedly the ‘Roman’ name for the island of Alderney. Although some researchers have cast doubt over this more recently, Riduna was once seen on shop fronts and as the name for the local rugby team. In fact, folks from Alderney used to call themselves Ridunains.

included with permission

Ancasta, from my second book Ancasta ~ Guide me Swiftly Home, is the Goddess of the River Itchen, Southampton, from which this novel flows, before, during and after WW1.

Thus, when I decided to publish my parents’ novella I thought it would be quite nice to continue the theme. Janus is said to the the ‘door’ or ‘gateway’ to another dimension. Since my parent’s little book was titled ‘Heaven on Earth’ I felt that Janus would be a perfect Gateway to the island life thy described therein.

Janus ~ Gateway to Heaven on Earth is available in paperback on Amazon. It will soon be available to order from any good bookshop too.

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My Review of 2024 in my Writing Life

On the Positive Side

  • I am writing again. Hoorah! It took a long time coming. I have completed the first draft of my sequel to MISSING Past and Present, and will begin to proof read it thoroughly before it goes to the editor. Hopefully to be released mid 2025.
  • Janus, Gateway to Heaven on Earth by my parents, Patricia and Arthur Jackson, is scheduled to be released on 23rd January 2025. It has been a special project for me, having lost both parents during covid, because it is being rereleased as a tribute to them (originally printed by The Daily Mail), with edits from myself, and will be sold in aid of The Alderney Museum. It is actually a prequel to my debut novel Riduna which was first published in 2009. So long ago.
  • Through Eventispress I have been supporting other writers, who have become my dear friends, too numerous to name here. Eventispress has a new Facebook Page. Do search for ‘Eventispress’ and like the page please. (I’m the only person to have done so and I need some friends! They have a good few followers now though) There are some excellent authors to support here and it is getting harder than ever to get this message across.

On the Negative Side

  • The first two projects have taken longer than we thought, but I hope the wait will be worth it and it is sooooo good to be writing again.
  • I have done very little personal promotional work and, like many, am finding Twitter hard to handle now. It’s just not enjoyable anymore. Should I jump ship and go to Bluesky? Many authors have. More about that in the new year.

Nothing else, which is fantastic!

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Why is Writing is Akin to Gardening?

Writing and gardening are my two main activities and I would argue that they they need a similar mindset.

Being Creative

Of course! When I am writing it is very much a visual experience, where pictures or a film reel transposes into words. A creative mind is one with imagination, having an idea of what the finished article is going to be like, whether it be picturing a flower bed or imagining a novel.

A cacophony of spring colour

Cutting out the dead wood

It has taken me years to be more ruthless in my garden (there does appear to be a rogue cerise foxglove in the bed above) but it has to be done, trimming, cutting back, pruning and even rooting out plants that have become too big or are in the wrong place. Similarly, the various layers of editing a novel are just like that.

The heather in February looks a picture but it will need a good trip when the flowers are over

Aiming for a harmony and consistency with the characters

Plants from a spectrum of colours look beautiful together, but so do those chosen carefully for height and contrast. Each plant then needs to be part of the whole picture. It may have beauty in itself, but if it is not consistent with the plot it will look out of place.

The Structure in the design completes the picture

In a garden, the walls, fencing, gravel, decking, grass, all play their part in creating a complete picture. It is the description of setting, which draws the picture for the reader, but it mustn’t be too overpowering taking away the wholeness, so that the reader is distracted or bored.

Sometimes the Result can take your breath away

My last novel, released days before lock down, has not reached the dizzy heights (for me that is) of Murder Now and Then, but Missing Past and Present is very special to me, and as one loyal reader said, ‘You really have discovered your true voice!’

What a lovely place to sit and read!

Finally you’ll just have to let it go

If you are forever tweaking a garden and noticing every weed as it pops its head up, you will never stand back (or better still sit and relax) and enjoy the whole garden. It is a tough moment for an author to ‘let go’ of a completed novel. There will always be a word to change or a scene you are sad you left out because it didn’t quite fit. You need to know the moment to Let it go and enjoy the ride!

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